The Ascension by Bloodbath

ok this is a simple bass riff, i made this myself,
standard tuning, be nice cuz this is my first tab
i would like some other comments i sure would like some 
pointers


G]---------------------------------------]
D]---------------------------------------]
A]---------------------------------------]
E]--0-2-3 --7-6----0-2-3--7--6-7-6-7-2-3-]

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